Tuesday, October 25, 2011
" Introduction"
All the people that we see do end up somewhere,and everybody endsup somewhere. Those places where theyend up at are called slums, but all their family move with them. The people that live in the slums walk on dirty water, no where to sleep, and the water covers all the streets. The family in the slums have dirty water, because nobody clean's their water
"Thesis Statement"
People that live in the slums do not have many place to drink water at ,because they have dirty water, no where to sleep, and children play in streets full off dirty water.
"Thesis Statement"
People that live in the slums do not have many place to drink water at ,because they have dirty water, no where to sleep, and children play in streets full off dirty water.
"Outline"
I. Introduction
A. People lost their homes end up somewhere
B.They end up in slums with thier family
C.People in slums walk on dirty water, no where to sleep, and the water covers the streets
D.the family have dirty water because nobody cleans it
II. Defendable Point #1
A. The dirty water is a big problem in the slums because people get sick
B. " Urbanization in the increase in area or population of city" make slums have more people. "Largerst slum in Kenya and their is one in Africa too" it is known for the population
C. Slums are not a good place to live at also the people live their beacuse the dont have jobs
D. Not only how dirty the water is and the people have anywhere to sleep beacuse they are shareing their house with family
III. Defendable Point #2
A. If you have a big family they will have to sleep with you to beacue the homes were not that big
B. " Homes are made out of mud and very croweded dirty" slums are not well clean or taken care of. "With less than a dollar you can survive" that you can live just with a dollar
C. Most people that live at the slums only earn like a dollar
D. Not only do they not have room to sleep their is also sirty water on the streets
IV. Defendable Point #3
A. The children play in the streets with all the dirty water
B. The toys that the kids play with are made out of "Made toys out of simple objects".
C. Kids make the toys out of different things to play with because thats all they can do
D. We should care about the people in the slums because it does not matter where they li8ve they are still human beans
V. Conclusion
A. The way those people lost their homes is they did not have enough money to pay their homes or lost their jobs
B. .People in slums walk on dirty water, no where to sleep, and the water covers the streets
C. We should care where they sleep , the kids play at and what they play with, and how did they ever get that dirty water in the streets
D. Allo of us should care about what they do no matter where they live or how poor they are. They are still people no matter what they do because they are still human beans
A. People lost their homes end up somewhere
B.They end up in slums with thier family
C.People in slums walk on dirty water, no where to sleep, and the water covers the streets
D.the family have dirty water because nobody cleans it
II. Defendable Point #1
A. The dirty water is a big problem in the slums because people get sick
B. " Urbanization in the increase in area or population of city" make slums have more people. "Largerst slum in Kenya and their is one in Africa too" it is known for the population
C. Slums are not a good place to live at also the people live their beacuse the dont have jobs
D. Not only how dirty the water is and the people have anywhere to sleep beacuse they are shareing their house with family
III. Defendable Point #2
A. If you have a big family they will have to sleep with you to beacue the homes were not that big
B. " Homes are made out of mud and very croweded dirty" slums are not well clean or taken care of. "With less than a dollar you can survive" that you can live just with a dollar
C. Most people that live at the slums only earn like a dollar
D. Not only do they not have room to sleep their is also sirty water on the streets
IV. Defendable Point #3
A. The children play in the streets with all the dirty water
B. The toys that the kids play with are made out of "Made toys out of simple objects".
C. Kids make the toys out of different things to play with because thats all they can do
D. We should care about the people in the slums because it does not matter where they li8ve they are still human beans
V. Conclusion
A. The way those people lost their homes is they did not have enough money to pay their homes or lost their jobs
B. .People in slums walk on dirty water, no where to sleep, and the water covers the streets
C. We should care where they sleep , the kids play at and what they play with, and how did they ever get that dirty water in the streets
D. Allo of us should care about what they do no matter where they live or how poor they are. They are still people no matter what they do because they are still human beans
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